FROSTY NIGHT
Leaves
Shivering
On trees.
Falling
Like snippets
Of lace
Soaked in sugar water.
Snowflakes
Adding
Their precise beauty
On beauty.
Forever
Whispering
The perfection of love.
©2020 Gwen Grant
FROSTY NIGHT
Leaves
Shivering
On trees.
Falling
Like snippets
Of lace
Soaked in sugar water.
Snowflakes
Adding
Their precise beauty
On beauty.
Forever
Whispering
The perfection of love.
©2020 Gwen Grant
Beautiful imagery 💟
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So glad you liked it, thank you.
Gwen.
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I agree with Gibberish – absolutely gorgeous imagery!! Beautifully crafted!!
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I’m so glad you like it and thank you for commenting. It’s always encouraging when an
appreciative post comes in. Imagery in a poem can be such a minefield!
Gwen.
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You are most welcome!! Yes, I agree, it’s a hard balance between something that resonates with power and something that is overblown or cliched. You always seem to get that balance just right!!!
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So kind of you, thank you. The stone boat is still fascinating me!
Gwen.
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