Where we lived when I was a girl, most of the gardens
around us were like my Dad’s. Full of vegetables, fruit,
flowers and hens. They were beautiful gardens and I
remember our garden with great fondness.
This poem has already been published but I’ve been thinking
about my family quite a lot lately, especially my Dad, so here is
a poem I wrote about him and his garden. I only have to
picture the garden in my head and it’s there, always in sunshine and
with the hens darting about, hiding wherever they can. Gardens
are priceless for what they bring to us.
LITTLE BROWN HENS AND RED
My father’s garden was full of little brown hens
High stepping, tippy tapping in and out of the daffodils,
Pecking at the Spring mint, settling in the potato patch,
Always protesting, always complaining.
Not enough of this. Too little of that.
The wicked tortoiseshell cat pinning them down
With eyes greener than the very grass they trod on.
They would crowd around the kitchen door,
Indignant little bodies demanding hen justice.
But they liked their bit of my father’s garden
With worms trying to live quietly beneath them.
Until my cousin came with his hard hands,
Hungry eyes and a heart intent on killing,
Then I went out shouting,
Scattering the little brown hens and the red,
Causing the dark cockerel
To turn his bitter, livid eye on my hateful presence.
Squawking, they fled, hiding under the hen coop.
Darting into the rhubarb leaves at the back of the tree.
But when my cousin kept coming, when his boots broke
The sunny daffodils, I pushed him so hard, he fell over,
I didn’t care about him.
For my little red hens and brown,
The arrogant cockerel with his angry eyes
All lived to tuck themselves up again
And sleep their tiny pulsing sleep.
To wake in the morning,
Ready for another really interesting day.
©2020 Gwen Grant
If I were a hen, I would be glad to have you Gwen as a guardian! It’s a lovely scene.
S.
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Wonderful, Gwen! First you draw us into their world, then hold us in suspense until the end! I love “And sleep their tiny pulsing sleep.” 🙂 Love the way you portray the rooster, too! “His bitter, livid eye”! Just marvelous!
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How kind of you to say so! I’ve just answered your blog. All my best wishes for you for the future.
Gwen.
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love it: vividly brought to life 🙂
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I have childhood memories of my family’s garden too, but we didn’t have little hens running around. I can see how they might make things, as you say, interesting!
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Thanks, John.
Gwen.
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As you might guess, that cousin didn’t disappear in a puff of smoke – he came back when I was out of the way. Less interesting would have been better!
Gwen.
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. It’s years ago since that garden and those hens and that wicked cousin existed but it’s all as clear as day in my mind. Thanks again, Camilla.
Gwen.
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